Photographs of final products :
Strengths:
Use of photography makes it look more professional.
Good packaging idea, combining all products.
Inside cover has a good hierarchy of type.
Areas for improvement:
Colour scheme could tie together better. Orange and red clash.
Could focus more on polka dot aspect as thats what its promoting.
More information about the range would be nice.
Considerations:
Images are slightly pixelated.
Type on the back of the flyer is offset, looks bland and not high fashion at the moment.
Capitals on Louis Vutton.
Glossy stock would suit well.
Action plan:
To make alteration to the designs, perhaps change the colour scheme
Correct and spelling mistakes and alignment of text on flyer
Consider different stocks and finishes such as foiling or embossing
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