Design for web: Crit feedback

Crit Feedback

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Strengths:
- Aesthetics of web page are relevant to topic, links well to fashion blogs
- Chosen images are fresh and bright
- Easy to navigate
- Navigation bar layout and designs look great
- Font used suit the website content

Areas for improvement:
- Need to be careful with image copyright, need to state source of image as well as where to purchase bags
- Would have liked to have seen design direction boards
- How it functions, the layout of the images would work best if the text and images doesn't move to the left, instead centred, would be more consistent
- Perhaps when enlarged you could make it go over the top of the other images, make them more noticeable by dimming the light on the rest of the content

Considerations:
- Typeface - Daisywheel is most clearer, less distracting from content
- Black and white idea would work really well if navigation is changed to a solid colour, something that will really stand out, pink perhaps?
- Where would extra info expand to? would be most effective if it popped up in the middle
- How will images shown on homepage be different from the rest
- Keep typeface consistent through titles/ links/ body copy
- Maybe you could do a fashion illustration to cover background?

After receiving my feedback  i had a quick talk with Loraine about my design, she said the to not complicate my website and keep each page individual, no links between the home page imagery and the page image (still sharing the same images) just not complicating think by crossing over with pages.